Picture:
The Tunnel
I see the dark, oak wood trees surround me. There are bushes, expanding around the
trees, and stumps of the forest foreground. The trees curling around the corner of a large
rock, blocking my perspective of the sun. The rough edges of the rock, smoothing the
closer I get. The grass swirling around each tree, growing longer and longer, by the
second. Broken branches then start to heal, growing faster than a cheetah running across
a long, blank, grassy field. “This is a mysterious place,” I say to myself. I then see the
trees arc into a circular formation, forming a tunnel for me to stride through. The tunnel
advanced for a very long time, as if the tail of the tunnel was getting smaller and smaller.
The tunnel then goes dark, as a silence fills the forest. Then the tunnel suddenly brightens
up, and there is a visible door at the very end, with nothing to provide information for
what may be on the other side.
Hi Jack, it's me Sanujan.
ReplyDeleteI am really impressed by your amazing 5 - 7 - 10, setting description. I also love all the scientific and technical words you've added in your writing, also I like the first groups of three. "Broken branches then start to heal, growing faster than a cheetah running across a long, blank, grassy field." As far as I know I can not notice any mistakes on your amazing 5 - 7 - 10 writing.
Keep Up The Fantastic Work
- Sanujan