For the first activity of day 5 for the Winter Learning Journey, we had to pretend that we got lost in a New Zealand Forest. We have to write 8-10 sentences at least about what we would feel, think.
I've just lost my group in a mysterious forest, and I don't know what to do. I don't know whether someone in my group will notice i'm gone very soon. There are bugs and animals everywhere, and I think I've had about 4 of them crawl up my back. I can hear lots of birds chirping from the trees above, but I think there's something else up there peering down at my existence. It's getting darker and I really hope someone will eventually find me. It's now 7:37 PM and I'm getting really scared that I'll stay lost for the next DAY! I need to find shelter sooner or later otherwise I'll get too cold. I think someone is near, I've been shouting at them and they're coming towards me. I hope it's my group.
Hi Jack. Great story. I like how you have used punctuation like commas and exclamation marks. I also like how you have wrote in your blurb what you had to do for this activity. Keep up the fabulous work, you have been posting.
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ReplyDeleteGood job on this activity. I really like the part in your story when you wrote: but I think there's something else up there peering down at my existence. It's a great sentence. Keep up the amazing work.
Daniel
Hi Jack
ReplyDeleteNice story! I like how you said that bugs have crawled up your back. Do you think that Curious Kiwi was worried?
Great work
Hello Jack, I really like how you have used different types of punctuation. You really hooked me in with your story. Keep up the fabulous work.
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