This week for writing we made another explanation text but this time we new what to do completely and knew how to make it better. The text is still the same subject but has better information.
Hey Alex =] I'm happy that you have spent time to post a comment on my blog. Most of the information I knew but some things I needed answers to. I hope you had a great scouts camp and I can't wait to see you tomorrow. =]
Hi Jack your explanation story about How Planes is really amazing and interesting. I like how you have the Title , Introduction , Explanation and the Conclusion. I really like your conclusion it is very fascinating. Great Job! Keep on working hard!
Hi Jack
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you put down your information in paragraph's. How long did it take you to gather all of this information?
Hey Alex =]
DeleteI'm happy that you have spent time to post a comment on my blog. Most of the information I knew but some things I needed answers to. I hope you had a great scouts camp and I can't wait to see you tomorrow. =]
Hi Jack the Explanation that you wrote was amazing. I really liked the way how you wrote lots of explanation in each paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHi Jack the Explanation that you wrote was amazing. I really liked the way how you wrote lots of explanation in each paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHi Jack your explanation story about How Planes is really amazing and interesting. I like how you have the Title , Introduction , Explanation and the Conclusion. I really like your conclusion it is very fascinating. Great Job! Keep on working hard!
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