L.I: how do words work to make a picture in our mind. Today we learnt about poetry. We learnt that you need in a poem a noun, an adjective, another adjective, a 3rd adjective, a verb, an adverb, an ending, an adjective to the ending, and another adjective to the ending.
First we had to do a poem as a group of 4, and then make a poem by our self. The First poem I made with Tai, Joseph and Te-Ponamu and it was,
The Dog
The Stinky Dog
The Stinky Dirty Dog
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog Farted
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog Farted Loudly
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog Farted Loudly Around The World
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog Farted Loudly Around The Big World
The Stinky Dirty Sleepy Dog Farted Loudly Around The Big, Wide World
This is my poem I did by myself.
Jack’s Poem
Poem Layout
A Noun
Add an Adjective
Add another Adjective
Add a 3rd Adjective
Add a Verb
Add an Adverb
Add an Ending
Add an Adjective to the ending
Add another Adjective
The Poem
The Very Funny Poem
The Very Funny, Hilarious Poem
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem Walked
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem Walked Loudly
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem Walked Loudly Down The Street
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem Walked Loudly Down The Peaceful Street
The Very Funny, Hilarious, Joyful Poem Walked Loudly Down The Peaceful, Tiny Street
Hello Jack. Interesting poem about a poem. I can see you have a good understanding of what a noun, adjective, verb, and adverb are.
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These are really clever poems Jack, well done. Mum xx
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