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Wednesday 21 June 2017

Writing: Narrative Commenting


L.I: to write a narrative.
L.I: to Buddy conference to start to edit and check writing.
This week for writing, we had to buddy check a persons narrative they had been writing the past week. Our prompt for our narrative for our groups was about a monster that comes from his swamp on Halloween night, so we all knew what things would most likely happen in another persons story. We had to comment on our partners narrative about bad things that need to be changed from what they currently were.

Comments That I Did:




                           

Comments That I Was Given:




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