Commenting: My Comment I've Published

Today I posted a smart comment on Alex's blogpost A smart comment is a comment that includes these things. A positive attitude, a question, encouragement, and a formal greeting.

Writing: Narrative Commenting

L.I: to write a narrative.

L.I: to Buddy conference to start to edit and check writing.
This week for writing, we had to buddy check a persons narrative they had been writing the past week. Our prompt for our narrative for our groups was about a monster that comes from his swamp on Halloween night, so we all knew what things would most likely happen in another persons story. We had to comment on our partners narrative about bad things that need to be changed from what they currently were.

Comments That I Did:

                           

Comments That I Was Given:

                                       

My Comment 2

This is my replied comment to Freeman from my class.Freeman said that my post looked fantastic and he said that he would know what to eat the most and what not to eat and I hope he was telling the truth.

My Comment

This is my comment on Sam's Healthy Food Heart.I made sure to have a Positive and specific,a connection,a question in it,some new information in it and I had to proof read my comment.