tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-485117365477877610.post1412499489644822134..comments2023-07-21T00:11:52.749+12:00Comments on Jack @ Panmure Bridge School: Winter Learning Journey: Day 5 | Activity 1PBS Bloggershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17718158506607083303noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-485117365477877610.post-89359332420598000112017-07-22T19:53:33.927+12:002017-07-22T19:53:33.927+12:00Hello Jack, I really like how you have used differ...Hello Jack, I really like how you have used different types of punctuation. You really hooked me in with your story. Keep up the fabulous work.aminiasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02977651187356968100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-485117365477877610.post-20375626780776635492017-07-20T11:59:07.000+12:002017-07-20T11:59:07.000+12:00Hi Jack
Nice story! I like how you said that bugs ...Hi Jack<br />Nice story! I like how you said that bugs have crawled up your back. Do you think that Curious Kiwi was worried?<br />Great workAlexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05344727725076161707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-485117365477877610.post-11163161520668239332017-07-19T13:56:10.979+12:002017-07-19T13:56:10.979+12:00Hello Jack
Good job on this activity. I really lik...Hello Jack<br />Good job on this activity. I really like the part in your story when you wrote: but I think there's something else up there peering down at my existence. It's a great sentence. Keep up the amazing work.<br />Danieldanielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600538330930746154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-485117365477877610.post-76112593063289015592017-07-18T18:03:18.999+12:002017-07-18T18:03:18.999+12:00Hi Jack. Great story. I like how you have used pun...Hi Jack. Great story. I like how you have used punctuation like commas and exclamation marks. I also like how you have wrote in your blurb what you had to do for this activity. Keep up the fabulous work, you have been posting.Ohhsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17416583868915227548noreply@blogger.com